A matrix reloaded ripoff is going to be in the next chapter of Return of the great mighty poo.

Inspired by the video on my last blog post.

Our contenders, the Master of All Evil from Eternia and a Dark King from a forgotten Empire. It’s time to look at their weapons, armor, and skills to find out who would win, a Death Battle!

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When I think of fight scenes in media, not only do I think of the stuff scene in the John Wick or The Raid series of films, but also of this particular passage:

Cormac McCarthy, Blood Meridian, 9-10

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If you want to see what the new chapter is like, here's a link to the story below.

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Odium continued to rage beneath her, struggling to bend his limbs at the awkward angles needed to get to the mare on his back. A claw scraped past her hooves, leaving behind a thin streak of blood. Twilight winced at the pain, allowing for the device to slip from her teeth. She plunged her head down again, feeling for the small chip.

“You really think tearing it out will do any good?” Void’s laughter boomed from all around.

“You’ll kill him if you try!”

Crunch.

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That made my day. Thanks. Chapter 4 is coming along slowly hope the updates come more on a weekly basis for a while. Actually have a lot of time on my hands. People will get introduced. And no there is not just vampires and demons. There are a few other supernatural clans here. But since Fluttershy is a vampire- they get the focus in this story. But yeah there's at least a lot of different stories up in this verse. I think six main stories with each different character and like three side

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I wrote over five thousand words today. Which to some is like nothing and to others is like wtf and holy shit mode but I am so proud of myself right now. Well that and seeing my story on the front page allong the likes of Glory of the Sun which is amazing you should read it. Like holy shit I am so stocked right now. I might try to see if I can hit six thousand today but my hands (read my carpeltunnel) is acting up.

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One thing I often see writers struggle with is physical action: things like fight scenes, races, or the like. Sequences where the characters are moving a lot and interacting with other physical elements in a short space of time. I struggle with it myself, come to that.

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There's a fight coming up in Chapter 5 of The Slash Of Truth but, I'm conflicted between two designs of the enemy. Should I pick:

The White Mask (Rainbow Six Seige)

Or the Taiwan Special Force’s uniform.

They're both cool designs but, I can only pick one. So, I want to hear what you guys think!

Cheers!

Episode 10 is live and ready for consumption! Let us know what you think in the comments and don't forget we have a discord thats up and coming! See me for an invite! :D

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/352582/11/equestrian-city/episode-10-first-encounters

Malcontent

Skip to 1:50 to see the sensitivity mob getting a taste of their own medicine.

WHEW, it's a doozy.

Also, good news! Someone took off their thumb down! My story now stands at 59 likes over 1 dislike! I'm very grateful for the change of heart, random person who originally disliked it. I'm glad I could entertain you enough to reconsider!

I thank all my readers for sticking with me thus far.

Emily tightened her grip around Splinter. With Starlight down for the count, this was all she had left.

The mare raised both amulets above Emily, readying for a final, blunt-force blow.

Please.

She braced herself as the amulets began to come down.

Please.